Much like her first fic, its really well written but the angst is just stretched to unbelievable levels that I can't with how she writes Shelby anymore. I'd actually like to see more island fics. Bored of closet case Shelby in various situation giving Toni the run around.Guest-angst wrote: ↑12 Jun 2021, 20:11da me too! the angst is killing me slowly but sweetly!Guest wrote: ↑12 Jun 2021, 19:20I'm just, jesus, I'm so sad from this chapterGuest wrote: ↑12 Jun 2021, 18:30neighbours update
https://archiveofourown.org/works/30822 ... s/76088675
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soccer AU where Shelby isn't a closet case.Guest wrote: ↑12 Jun 2021, 21:04Much like her first fic, its really well written but the angst is just stretched to unbelievable levels that I can't with how she writes Shelby anymore. I'd actually like to see more island fics. Bored of closet case Shelby in various situation giving Toni the run around.Guest-angst wrote: ↑12 Jun 2021, 20:11da me too! the angst is killing me slowly but sweetly!Guest wrote: ↑12 Jun 2021, 19:20I'm just, jesus, I'm so sad from this chapterGuest wrote: ↑12 Jun 2021, 18:30neighbours update
https://archiveofourown.org/works/30822 ... s/76088675
https://archiveofourown.org/works/31449827
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Just not that into AUs to be honest but might have a look.Guest wrote: ↑12 Jun 2021, 21:14soccer AU where Shelby isn't a closet case.Guest wrote: ↑12 Jun 2021, 21:04Much like her first fic, its really well written but the angst is just stretched to unbelievable levels that I can't with how she writes Shelby anymore. I'd actually like to see more island fics. Bored of closet case Shelby in various situation giving Toni the run around.Guest-angst wrote: ↑12 Jun 2021, 20:11da me too! the angst is killing me slowly but sweetly!Guest wrote: ↑12 Jun 2021, 19:20I'm just, jesus, I'm so sad from this chapterGuest wrote: ↑12 Jun 2021, 18:30neighbours update
https://archiveofourown.org/works/30822 ... s/76088675
https://archiveofourown.org/works/31449827
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So happy that there are so many fic updates but none of them are Curtain Call
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It's just not all that believable to me that she'd go through with the wedding when the guy is verbally and physically abusive. She clearly can't stand him. If she's so worried about what her parents think, it would make more sense for her to tell them that's why it didn't work out, and instead find a nice guy who'd be willing to pose as a beard. That part is just too unrealistic.Guest wrote: ↑12 Jun 2021, 21:04Much like her first fic, its really well written but the angst is just stretched to unbelievable levels that I can't with how she writes Shelby anymore. I'd actually like to see more island fics. Bored of closet case Shelby in various situation giving Toni the run around.Guest-angst wrote: ↑12 Jun 2021, 20:11da me too! the angst is killing me slowly but sweetly!Guest wrote: ↑12 Jun 2021, 19:20I'm just, jesus, I'm so sad from this chapterGuest wrote: ↑12 Jun 2021, 18:30neighbours update
https://archiveofourown.org/works/30822 ... s/76088675
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DA Duuuuudeeee! Spoilers!Guest wrote: ↑13 Jun 2021, 09:29Guest wrote: ↑12 Jun 2021, 21:04Much like her first fic, its really well written but the angst is just stretched to unbelievable levels that I can't with how she writes Shelby anymore. I'd actually like to see more island fics. Bored of closet case Shelby in various situation giving Toni the run around.Guest-angst wrote: ↑12 Jun 2021, 20:11da me too! the angst is killing me slowly but sweetly!Guest wrote: ↑12 Jun 2021, 19:20I'm just, jesus, I'm so sad from this chapterGuest wrote: ↑12 Jun 2021, 18:30neighbours update
https://archiveofourown.org/works/30822 ... s/76088675
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This is the boys season lmaoo what a shit show it will be. Well the girls definitely there on paid vacation because they just film like 3 days and that’s it. The boys have been non stop what so ever. This will be like their 3rd week in a row because last week even though the girls were filming so were they. And if they are staying in the villa’s means they will be there all week filming island scenes.
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You are just fooling yourselves. We've already been told by the boys they are there through August.
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I think it's Juicy by Notorious B.I.GGuest wrote: ↑13 Jun 2021, 14:05What is Toni and Martha song?
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i wouldn’t say well written i can’t get past the inability to properly punctuate speech. i can overlook it when reading the smut but not when it’s meant to be a real hard hitting story. can’t make myself care about toni or shelby in fics when they’re written this way. shelby so unlikable and toni so pathetic.Guest wrote: ↑12 Jun 2021, 21:04Much like her first fic, its really well written but the angst is just stretched to unbelievable levels that I can't with how she writes Shelby anymore. I'd actually like to see more island fics. Bored of closet case Shelby in various situation giving Toni the run around.Guest-angst wrote: ↑12 Jun 2021, 20:11da me too! the angst is killing me slowly but sweetly!Guest wrote: ↑12 Jun 2021, 19:20I'm just, jesus, I'm so sad from this chapterGuest wrote: ↑12 Jun 2021, 18:30neighbours update
https://archiveofourown.org/works/30822 ... s/76088675
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DAGuest wrote: ↑14 Jun 2021, 03:32i wouldn’t say well written i can’t get past the inability to properly punctuate speech. i can overlook it when reading the smut but not when it’s meant to be a real hard hitting story. can’t make myself care about toni or shelby in fics when they’re written this way. shelby so unlikable and toni so pathetic.Guest wrote: ↑12 Jun 2021, 21:04Much like her first fic, its really well written but the angst is just stretched to unbelievable levels that I can't with how she writes Shelby anymore. I'd actually like to see more island fics. Bored of closet case Shelby in various situation giving Toni the run around.Guest-angst wrote: ↑12 Jun 2021, 20:11da me too! the angst is killing me slowly but sweetly!Guest wrote: ↑12 Jun 2021, 19:20I'm just, jesus, I'm so sad from this chapterGuest wrote: ↑12 Jun 2021, 18:30neighbours update
https://archiveofourown.org/works/30822 ... s/76088675
I haven't noticed too much of that. Actually, she's doing quite a good job comparing to many others out there. But that's really beside the point. The point is that it's a freaking fanfiction, not a professionally edited and proofread classic piece.
I'm not sure what some of you really expect from a non-professional writers that do this as a hobby, in their spare time and for free. If you want "perfection", go to the bookstore (although, you will find grammatical errors and missed punctuation in those too, sometimes).
Everyone is welcome to express their opinion on fanfics, and that's fair game, but I really do not appreciate it when people basically piss on fanfic writers, who put in the time and the effort to give us these stories, without getting anything in return apart from maybe a few nice comments.
P.S. English is my third language, so feel free to be an asshat about my grammar and punctuation in this post, too.
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QMTA as I have just noticed that, in the bold sentence above, you didn't punctuate properly, so that's like super ironic!Guest - don't be an asshat wrote: ↑14 Jun 2021, 04:47DAGuest wrote: ↑14 Jun 2021, 03:32i wouldn’t say well written i can’t get past the inability to properly punctuate speech. i can overlook it when reading the smut but not when it’s meant to be a real hard hitting story. can’t make myself care about toni or shelby in fics when they’re written this way. shelby so unlikable and toni so pathetic.Guest wrote: ↑12 Jun 2021, 21:04Much like her first fic, its really well written but the angst is just stretched to unbelievable levels that I can't with how she writes Shelby anymore. I'd actually like to see more island fics. Bored of closet case Shelby in various situation giving Toni the run around.
I haven't noticed too much of that. Actually, she's doing quite a good job comparing to many others out there. But that's really beside the point. The point is that it's a freaking fanfiction, not a professionally edited and proofread classic piece.
I'm not sure what some of you really expect from a non-professional writers that do this as a hobby, in their spare time and for free. If you want "perfection", go to the bookstore (although, you will find grammatical errors and missed punctuation in those too, sometimes).
Everyone is welcome to express their opinion on fanfics, and that's fair game, but I really do not appreciate it when people basically piss on fanfic writers, who put in the time and the effort to give us these stories, without getting anything in return apart from maybe a few nice comments.
P.S. English is my third language, so feel free to be an asshat about my grammar and punctuation in this post, too.
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With the girls not filming and not being together, Mia somewhere in holiday, Sophia looking at kangaroos.... Any excitment I had left has completely gone. I'll stay to see tnr's fic complete but I just don't even care about mia anymore and that was the last thing keeping me in
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Guest wrote: ↑14 Jun 2021, 10:04neighbours update!
https://archiveofourown.org/works/30822 ... s/79092619
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Fucking hell. What a thing to read on a Monday morning, neighbours just killing me
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i don't know how i feel about this chapter....Guest wrote: ↑14 Jun 2021, 10:04neighbours update!
https://archiveofourown.org/works/30822 ... s/79092619
All i know is that i wish i didn't read it cause i'm in pain now.
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Fuck Shelby for being a pathetic wuss.Guest..... wrote: ↑14 Jun 2021, 12:11i don't know how i feel about this chapter....Guest wrote: ↑14 Jun 2021, 10:04neighbours update!
https://archiveofourown.org/works/30822 ... s/79092619
All i know is that i wish i didn't read it cause i'm in pain now.
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Guest wrote: ↑14 Jun 2021, 13:00Fuck Shelby for being a pathetic wuss.Guest..... wrote: ↑14 Jun 2021, 12:11i don't know how i feel about this chapter....Guest wrote: ↑14 Jun 2021, 10:04neighbours update!
https://archiveofourown.org/works/30822 ... s/79092619
All i know is that i wish i didn't read it cause i'm in pain now.
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DA We have excellent artists and writers in this fandom, but everyone thinks they can do better. Then go write something better. Don’t like it, don’t read it doesn’t just apply to smut. It also applies to fics you don’t like. You can just say something isn’t your thing and move on. No need to be rude to the writer. Not everything is written for your specific preferences.Guest - don't be an asshat wrote: ↑14 Jun 2021, 04:47DAGuest wrote: ↑14 Jun 2021, 03:32i wouldn’t say well written i can’t get past the inability to properly punctuate speech. i can overlook it when reading the smut but not when it’s meant to be a real hard hitting story. can’t make myself care about toni or shelby in fics when they’re written this way. shelby so unlikable and toni so pathetic.Guest wrote: ↑12 Jun 2021, 21:04
Much like her first fic, its really well written but the angst is just stretched to unbelievable levels that I can't with how she writes Shelby anymore. I'd actually like to see more island fics. Bored of closet case Shelby in various situation giving Toni the run around.
I haven't noticed too much of that. Actually, she's doing quite a good job comparing to many others out there. But that's really beside the point. The point is that it's a freaking fanfiction, not a professionally edited and proofread classic piece.
I'm not sure what some of you really expect from a non-professional writers that do this as a hobby, in their spare time and for free. If you want "perfection", go to the bookstore (although, you will find grammatical errors and missed punctuation in those too, sometimes).
Everyone is welcome to express their opinion on fanfics, and that's fair game, but I really do not appreciate it when people basically piss on fanfic writers, who put in the time and the effort to give us these stories, without getting anything in return apart from maybe a few nice comments.
P.S. English is my third language, so feel free to be an asshat about my grammar and punctuation in this post, too.
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What? Doesn't he have a girlfriend? What you on about?Guest wrote: ↑14 Jun 2021, 15:57Sophia and minicarlos i knew this would happen with male cast
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What do you mean by this? If you are implying that they are dating to whatever he has a girlfriend. But she does hang out with Alex a lotGuest wrote: ↑14 Jun 2021, 15:57Sophia and minicarlos i knew this would happen with male cast
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Da my problem with many shoni fanfics is the out of character stuff it seems the writers are confused about toni and shelby’s personalities on the shiw or they wrote those stories with other characters in mind.Guest - don't be an asshat wrote: ↑14 Jun 2021, 04:47DAGuest wrote: ↑14 Jun 2021, 03:32i wouldn’t say well written i can’t get past the inability to properly punctuate speech. i can overlook it when reading the smut but not when it’s meant to be a real hard hitting story. can’t make myself care about toni or shelby in fics when they’re written this way. shelby so unlikable and toni so pathetic.Guest wrote: ↑12 Jun 2021, 21:04Much like her first fic, its really well written but the angst is just stretched to unbelievable levels that I can't with how she writes Shelby anymore. I'd actually like to see more island fics. Bored of closet case Shelby in various situation giving Toni the run around.
I haven't noticed too much of that. Actually, she's doing quite a good job comparing to many others out there. But that's really beside the point. The point is that it's a freaking fanfiction, not a professionally edited and proofread classic piece.
I'm not sure what some of you really expect from a non-professional writers that do this as a hobby, in their spare time and for free. If you want "perfection", go to the bookstore (although, you will find grammatical errors and missed punctuation in those too, sometimes).
Everyone is welcome to express their opinion on fanfics, and that's fair game, but I really do not appreciate it when people basically piss on fanfic writers, who put in the time and the effort to give us these stories, without getting anything in return apart from maybe a few nice comments.
P.S. English is my third language, so feel free to be an asshat about my grammar and punctuation in this post, too.
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X2 most likely written for other fandoms but they should at least adapt the story to fit their canon personalities. Its most noticeable with smut that they didn't think of them when writing itGuest wrote: ↑14 Jun 2021, 16:04Da my problem with many shoni fanfics is the out of character stuff it seems the writers are confused about toni and shelby’s personalities on the shiw or they wrote those stories with other characters in mind.Guest - don't be an asshat wrote: ↑14 Jun 2021, 04:47DAGuest wrote: ↑14 Jun 2021, 03:32i wouldn’t say well written i can’t get past the inability to properly punctuate speech. i can overlook it when reading the smut but not when it’s meant to be a real hard hitting story. can’t make myself care about toni or shelby in fics when they’re written this way. shelby so unlikable and toni so pathetic.Guest wrote: ↑12 Jun 2021, 21:04Much like her first fic, its really well written but the angst is just stretched to unbelievable levels that I can't with how she writes Shelby anymore. I'd actually like to see more island fics. Bored of closet case Shelby in various situation giving Toni the run around.
I haven't noticed too much of that. Actually, she's doing quite a good job comparing to many others out there. But that's really beside the point. The point is that it's a freaking fanfiction, not a professionally edited and proofread classic piece.
I'm not sure what some of you really expect from a non-professional writers that do this as a hobby, in their spare time and for free. If you want "perfection", go to the bookstore (although, you will find grammatical errors and missed punctuation in those too, sometimes).
Everyone is welcome to express their opinion on fanfics, and that's fair game, but I really do not appreciate it when people basically piss on fanfic writers, who put in the time and the effort to give us these stories, without getting anything in return apart from maybe a few nice comments.
P.S. English is my third language, so feel free to be an asshat about my grammar and punctuation in this post, too.
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If I see Bottom Toni in the tags, I'm not reading it. What is this obsession with Toni being so pathetic, needy and passive in bed? It's always detailed descriptions of Shelby fucking Toni through multiple orgasms and then maybe a paragraph of Toni returning the favour, if that.
Most of the time I skip smut scenes now because it's so repetitive that it's boring.
Just because Toni's soft it doesn't make her a borderline pillow princess ffs. I hate that this fandom is so hive minded.
Most of the time I skip smut scenes now because it's so repetitive that it's boring.
Just because Toni's soft it doesn't make her a borderline pillow princess ffs. I hate that this fandom is so hive minded.
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tks anonGuest wrote: ↑12 Jun 2021, 21:14soccer AU where Shelby isn't a closet case.Guest wrote: ↑12 Jun 2021, 21:04Much like her first fic, its really well written but the angst is just stretched to unbelievable levels that I can't with how she writes Shelby anymore. I'd actually like to see more island fics. Bored of closet case Shelby in various situation giving Toni the run around.Guest-angst wrote: ↑12 Jun 2021, 20:11da me too! the angst is killing me slowly but sweetly!Guest wrote: ↑12 Jun 2021, 19:20I'm just, jesus, I'm so sad from this chapterGuest wrote: ↑12 Jun 2021, 18:30neighbours update
https://archiveofourown.org/works/30822 ... s/76088675
https://archiveofourown.org/works/31449827
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A lot of the time, people ship tropes and premises and then force a pairing to fit. Sometimes it comes off because there's a good reason a pairing was thought to fit and it does actually do so, but then you get the times when it's obvious somebody just wanted to write a particular plot with their pairing of the moment. Which is fair enough, write what you like. But it's also fair that I favor the in character stuff more.Guest wrote: ↑14 Jun 2021, 16:15X2 most likely written for other fandoms but they should at least adapt the story to fit their canon personalities. Its most noticeable with smut that they didn't think of them when writing itGuest wrote: ↑14 Jun 2021, 16:04Da my problem with many shoni fanfics is the out of character stuff it seems the writers are confused about toni and shelby’s personalities on the shiw or they wrote those stories with other characters in mind.Guest - don't be an asshat wrote: ↑14 Jun 2021, 04:47DAGuest wrote: ↑14 Jun 2021, 03:32i wouldn’t say well written i can’t get past the inability to properly punctuate speech. i can overlook it when reading the smut but not when it’s meant to be a real hard hitting story. can’t make myself care about toni or shelby in fics when they’re written this way. shelby so unlikable and toni so pathetic.Guest wrote: ↑12 Jun 2021, 21:04
Much like her first fic, its really well written but the angst is just stretched to unbelievable levels that I can't with how she writes Shelby anymore. I'd actually like to see more island fics. Bored of closet case Shelby in various situation giving Toni the run around.
I haven't noticed too much of that. Actually, she's doing quite a good job comparing to many others out there. But that's really beside the point. The point is that it's a freaking fanfiction, not a professionally edited and proofread classic piece.
I'm not sure what some of you really expect from a non-professional writers that do this as a hobby, in their spare time and for free. If you want "perfection", go to the bookstore (although, you will find grammatical errors and missed punctuation in those too, sometimes).
Everyone is welcome to express their opinion on fanfics, and that's fair game, but I really do not appreciate it when people basically piss on fanfic writers, who put in the time and the effort to give us these stories, without getting anything in return apart from maybe a few nice comments.
P.S. English is my third language, so feel free to be an asshat about my grammar and punctuation in this post, too.
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da yeah, fuck that s#it!Guest wrote: ↑14 Jun 2021, 13:10Guest wrote: ↑14 Jun 2021, 13:00Fuck Shelby for being a pathetic wuss.Guest..... wrote: ↑14 Jun 2021, 12:11i don't know how i feel about this chapter....Guest wrote: ↑14 Jun 2021, 10:04neighbours update!
https://archiveofourown.org/works/30822 ... s/79092619
All i know is that i wish i didn't read it cause i'm in pain now.
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X2 agreed. It makes it seem like these people have never had a partner or had sex beforeGuest0 wrote: ↑14 Jun 2021, 16:45If I see Bottom Toni in the tags, I'm not reading it. What is this obsession with Toni being so pathetic, needy and passive in bed? It's always detailed descriptions of Shelby fucking Toni through multiple orgasms and then maybe a paragraph of Toni returning the favour, if that.
Most of the time I skip smut scenes now because it's so repetitive that it's boring.
Just because Toni's soft it doesn't make her a borderline pillow princess ffs. I hate that this fandom is so hive minded.
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Even if the fic does have a happy ending I would have liked it a lot more if Shelby hadn’t gone through with the wedding.
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I don't read or watch the fiction for the unhappy endings, so I am done with this one which turned into crap, no matter how good the writing is. #sorrynotsorry
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What happened?Guest wrote: ↑14 Jun 2021, 15:57Sophia and minicarlos i knew this would happen with male cast
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I get bored and lose interest when fics are too happy so I'm enjoying the wedding angst. The author is teasing but I think ultimately we will get a happy ending for the fic.
Shelby might benefit from a chapter in her POV but I think her position and fears have been explained well enough that her actions make sense despite being an independent adult. She's not afraid of getting kicked/cut off out or anything like that obviously like a high school/college Shelby would. But she is afraid of losing her family and being all alone in the world. Maybe you have to have lived that situation to really understand? My family is similarly homophobic and like Shelby I can't imagine ever living my truth because the trade off is losing them. Despite some very backwards beliefs, there's still love and comfort in having "your tribe". Friends and lovers can leave you or move on or just drift apart. Blood is blood.
I don't think Toni is a pushover in this fic. Just extremely empathetic which for someone who feels first and thinks later doesn't seem too out of character for an adult and more mature Toni. I don't think Shelby pushes her into anything or takes advantage of that, but Toni chooses to act how she does because she's in love.
One of things I like most is how Toni refuses to say those words because she's so afraid it won't be enough and she doesn't want to face that. But sadly I think that's what Shelby needed to hear to make a different decision.
Sorry for the essay about a damn fanfiction
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Da but I’m waiting to finish chapters 14-end until it’s completed.Guest wrote: ↑14 Jun 2021, 19:05I get bored and lose interest when fics are too happy so I'm enjoying the wedding angst. The author is teasing but I think ultimately we will get a happy ending for the fic.
Shelby might benefit from a chapter in her POV but I think her position and fears have been explained well enough that her actions make sense despite being an independent adult. She's not afraid of getting kicked/cut off out or anything like that obviously like a high school/college Shelby would. But she is afraid of losing her family and being all alone in the world. Maybe you have to have lived that situation to really understand? My family is similarly homophobic and like Shelby I can't imagine ever living my truth because the trade off is losing them. Despite some very backwards beliefs, there's still love and comfort in having "your tribe". Friends and lovers can leave you or move on or just drift apart. Blood is blood.
I don't think Toni is a pushover in this fic. Just extremely empathetic which for someone who feels first and thinks later doesn't seem too out of character for an adult and more mature Toni. I don't think Shelby pushes her into anything or takes advantage of that, but Toni chooses to act how she does because she's in love.
One of things I like most is how Toni refuses to say those words because she's so afraid it won't be enough and she doesn't want to face that. But sadly I think that's what Shelby needed to hear to make a different decision.
Sorry for the essay about a damn fanfiction
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DA Wow! I pretty much disagree with everything you wrote. Blood is blood? C'mon, we're not in the 13th century!Guest wrote: ↑14 Jun 2021, 19:05I get bored and lose interest when fics are too happy so I'm enjoying the wedding angst. The author is teasing but I think ultimately we will get a happy ending for the fic.
Shelby might benefit from a chapter in her POV but I think her position and fears have been explained well enough that her actions make sense despite being an independent adult. She's not afraid of getting kicked/cut off out or anything like that obviously like a high school/college Shelby would. But she is afraid of losing her family and being all alone in the world. Maybe you have to have lived that situation to really understand? My family is similarly homophobic and like Shelby I can't imagine ever living my truth because the trade off is losing them. Despite some very backwards beliefs, there's still love and comfort in having "your tribe". Friends and lovers can leave you or move on or just drift apart. Blood is blood.
I don't think Toni is a pushover in this fic. Just extremely empathetic which for someone who feels first and thinks later doesn't seem too out of character for an adult and more mature Toni. I don't think Shelby pushes her into anything or takes advantage of that, but Toni chooses to act how she does because she's in love.
One of things I like most is how Toni refuses to say those words because she's so afraid it won't be enough and she doesn't want to face that. But sadly I think that's what Shelby needed to hear to make a different decision.
Sorry for the essay about a damn fanfiction
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Yeah for real, like toni is definitely a switch in my opinion. She also seems like someone eager to please so I can totally see her as a service top. That being said, the whole top/bottom discourse is so overplayed at this point too; it’s not that black and white in most relationships.Guest0 wrote: ↑14 Jun 2021, 16:45If I see Bottom Toni in the tags, I'm not reading it. What is this obsession with Toni being so pathetic, needy and passive in bed? It's always detailed descriptions of Shelby fucking Toni through multiple orgasms and then maybe a paragraph of Toni returning the favour, if that.
Most of the time I skip smut scenes now because it's so repetitive that it's boring.
Just because Toni's soft it doesn't make her a borderline pillow princess ffs. I hate that this fandom is so hive minded.
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Alex has a musician gf apparently. The cast went to her show together last month. Now Reign and Zack?...maybe.
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Oh well nvm then lol I guess sophia just prefers to hang out with the boys. And yea I get that same vibe from reign and ZackGuest9 wrote: ↑14 Jun 2021, 21:07Alex has a musician gf apparently. The cast went to her show together last month. Now Reign and Zack?...maybe.
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Da - I get easily bored when there's no conflict or angst in fics so I'm actually reveling in it rn.Guest wrote: ↑14 Jun 2021, 19:05I get bored and lose interest when fics are too happy so I'm enjoying the wedding angst. The author is teasing but I think ultimately we will get a happy ending for the fic.
Shelby might benefit from a chapter in her POV but I think her position and fears have been explained well enough that her actions make sense despite being an independent adult. She's not afraid of getting kicked/cut off out or anything like that obviously like a high school/college Shelby would. But she is afraid of losing her family and being all alone in the world. Maybe you have to have lived that situation to really understand? My family is similarly homophobic and like Shelby I can't imagine ever living my truth because the trade off is losing them. Despite some very backwards beliefs, there's still love and comfort in having "your tribe". Friends and lovers can leave you or move on or just drift apart. Blood is blood.
I don't think Toni is a pushover in this fic. Just extremely empathetic which for someone who feels first and thinks later doesn't seem too out of character for an adult and more mature Toni. I don't think Shelby pushes her into anything or takes advantage of that, but Toni chooses to act how she does because she's in love.
One of things I like most is how Toni refuses to say those words because she's so afraid it won't be enough and she doesn't want to face that. But sadly I think that's what Shelby needed to hear to make a different decision.
Sorry for the essay about a damn fanfiction
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I got the vibe Zack was gay.Guestst5 wrote: ↑14 Jun 2021, 21:11Oh well nvm then lol I guess sophia just prefers to hang out with the boys. And yea I get that same vibe from reign and ZackGuest9 wrote: ↑14 Jun 2021, 21:07Alex has a musician gf apparently. The cast went to her show together last month. Now Reign and Zack?...maybe.
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Do any of the girls... not hang out with the boys? If i were in the cast i sure wouldn't lmaoGuestst5 wrote: ↑14 Jun 2021, 21:11Oh well nvm then lol I guess sophia just prefers to hang out with the boys. And yea I get that same vibe from reign and ZackGuest9 wrote: ↑14 Jun 2021, 21:07Alex has a musician gf apparently. The cast went to her show together last month. Now Reign and Zack?...maybe.
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I think the op means that sophia prefers to hang out with the boys over the girls. I feel like she’s one of those straight girls who has more male friends idkGuest wrote: ↑15 Jun 2021, 03:57Do any of the girls... not hang out with the boys? If i were in the cast i sure wouldn't lmaoGuestst5 wrote: ↑14 Jun 2021, 21:11Oh well nvm then lol I guess sophia just prefers to hang out with the boys. And yea I get that same vibe from reign and ZackGuest9 wrote: ↑14 Jun 2021, 21:07Alex has a musician gf apparently. The cast went to her show together last month. Now Reign and Zack?...maybe.
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Just like her character, Fatin "I don't get tight with girls" Jadmani.Guest wrote: ↑15 Jun 2021, 04:06I think the op means that sophia prefers to hang out with the boys over the girls. I feel like she’s one of those straight girls who has more male friends idkGuest wrote: ↑15 Jun 2021, 03:57Do any of the girls... not hang out with the boys? If i were in the cast i sure wouldn't lmaoGuestst5 wrote: ↑14 Jun 2021, 21:11Oh well nvm then lol I guess sophia just prefers to hang out with the boys. And yea I get that same vibe from reign and ZackGuest9 wrote: ↑14 Jun 2021, 21:07Alex has a musician gf apparently. The cast went to her show together last month. Now Reign and Zack?...maybe.Gues5t wrote: ↑14 Jun 2021, 16:02
What do you mean by this? If you are implying that they are dating to whatever he has a girlfriend. But she does hang out with Alex a lot
But I also think she hangs out more with the boys especially since Helena isn't there. She might feel like the third wheel with the other girls' pairings (Mia/Erana, Shannon/Sarah, Reign/Jenna).
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